[pressgang] Quote of the Day, October 29, 2018
Kevin Nauta
prydonia at sbcglobal.net
Tue Oct 30 03:00:48 GMT 2018
Lynda: Just wanted to say, sir - thanks for thearticle.
Mr. Sullivan: Oh, not at all. Did you like it?
Lynda: Could we talk about the first paragraph, sir?
Mr. Sullivan: What's wrong with the first paragraph?
Lynda: Well it's a bit flabby isn't it, sir?
Mr. Sullivan: It is not flabby!
Lynda: You don't have to be defensive, sir!
Mr. Sullivan: I'm not being defensive. I am neverdefensive!
Lynda: Look, I just don't think we can afford to bethat flabby in the first paragraph - what with the second paragraph…
Mr. Sullivan: What's wrong withthe second paragraph?
Lynda: Well it's a bit flabbyisn't it, sir?
Mr. Sullivan: That's not flab, Lynda - that's style! Isthere any part of the article you did like?
Lynda: Oh I liked it. There was just a bit too much…style.
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