[pressgang] Quote of the Day, January 28, 2024
prydonia
prydonia at proton.me
Mon Jan 29 03:55:24 GMT 2024
Lynda:Just wanted to say, sir - thanks for the article.
Mr. Sullivan:Oh, not at all. Did you like it?
Lynda:Could we talk about the first paragraph, sir?
Mr. Sullivan:What's wrong with the first paragraph?
Lynda:Well it's a bit flabby isn't it, sir?
Mr. Sullivan:It is not flabby!
Lynda:You don't have to be defensive, sir!
Mr. Sullivan:I'm not being defensive. I am never defensive!
Lynda:Look, I just don't think we can afford to be that flabby in the first paragraph - what with the second paragraph…
Mr. Sullivan: What's wrong with the second paragraph?
Lynda: Well it's a bit flabby isn't it, sir?
Mr. Sullivan:That's not flab, Lynda - that's style! Is there any part of the article you did like?
Lynda:Oh I liked it. There was just a bit too much… style.
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